10-08-2015, 08:31 PM
Ruby/ Lubbock had mentioned me reviewing Grave's death scene. I'll do it soon as I have a bit on my plate, but if you wanted me to look at your stuff, and give you a little feedback on specific parts, the saga is "over" (-versed) so I don't mind telling you why you got a certain score, or didn't do as well on a certain part.
All this provided you have questions that aren't super imposing on the judges.
I figure I'll throw this thread up now, and then in a few days I can get around to it, and there may be some accumulated requests. I'll also look back in my inbox to see who else requested this, as I believe a few people mentioned me looking at their stuff.
"What can I do to improve on this sort of storyline in the future." Is a good question/prompt to ask, as I will -in this topic- take the time to pull out your scorecard and take a thorough individual look at some improvement or just your writing style.
All this provided you have questions that aren't super imposing on the judges.
I figure I'll throw this thread up now, and then in a few days I can get around to it, and there may be some accumulated requests. I'll also look back in my inbox to see who else requested this, as I believe a few people mentioned me looking at their stuff.
"What can I do to improve on this sort of storyline in the future." Is a good question/prompt to ask, as I will -in this topic- take the time to pull out your scorecard and take a thorough individual look at some improvement or just your writing style.
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