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Official Move Approval III
Dante Wrote:Just approving some weapon upgrades to be purchased later on.

Rebellion - 600 OM (Requires Physical Strength, Remote Control Proficiency)
A weapon infused with the power of a devil (frequently known as a Devil Arm), this sword is a keepsake from Dante's father, the Dark Knight Sparda. It is designed like a claymore, but it bears a thicker blade (akin to a broadsword) and a stylized skeletal crossguard; the sword itself measures about 5 feet long with around 4 feet of blade.
Rebellion has no outstanding abilities as a Devil Arm, but it it bound to Dante's demonic soul as a manifestation of his power. With this, the Son of Sparda is able to metaphysically reach out to Rebellion and seize it even when it leaves his hands. By concentrating and remaining still, Dante can manually control his blade like a guided, spinning projectile, returning it to his hand or aiming it towards his enemies. He can't sustain this ability for more than 5 seconds at a time, and repeated use will mentally exhaust him.

So he can control it at a distance from himself? That'll use Ranged Prof, which I'm certain you have anyway(?)

Approved.

Quote:Stinger - 300 OM (Requires Rebellion, Burst Movement)
Dante performs a burst straight forward (up to 7 meters) and thrusts hard with his sword as if to stab his foe. This attack will not impale an enemy, but instead punches them back with the sheer force behind the blow, though they will still be physically wounded from the attack itself. Dante pauses for a moment to right his stance after he executes this move, leaving him vulnerable if he missed.

Approved.

Quote:(This move was approved before, but I've since made modifications that would warrant review.)
Gilgamesh - 300 OM (Requires Physical Proficiency)
A Devil Arm forged in the form of a five-piece set of armor: a pair of gauntlets and greaves, and a back-plate fixed atop Dante's spine. These function less like armor, however, and more like a bolster to one's hand-to-hand skills. By itself, Dante can execute punches and kicks with significant strength, even if a bit slow and stiff. Dante can summon/despawn this weapon at will with a moment's concentration, but cannot wield it in tandem with any other weapons.

Can you state how this is different and/or what you've changed. It's one thing if you're just changing something cosmetic, but if you're changing actual function, you'll have to buy a new Move.

Quote:(Repurchasing this Power-Up with different stats because I felt it wasn't appropriate to Dante before.)
Devil Trigger - Tier 1 Power-Up - 1000 OM
With a flash of lighting and a burst of demonic runes, Dante channels his blood heritage to unleash the devil within, granting him incredible strength.
ATK: +2 [5]
DEF: +2 [5]
SPD: +1 [3]
TEC: +0 [2]

This is approved, but if you don't want the existing version, you'll have to refund it and repurchase the new version.
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