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Official Move Approval III
Black Mage Wrote:Tier 1 Offensive Supermove: Quake(Area Attack Proficiency)(600 OM)

The Black Mage kneels on one knee and places a hand on the ground, causing glowing runs to begin to form and expand around him in a 20 meter circle. When the circle is completed the Black Mage clenches his free hand into a fist and launches it at the ground, releasing a powerful wave of seismic energy around him throughout the created runes, knocking foes upwards before spikes of earth rise up to skewer those caught in the rune.

Good.


Black Mage Wrote:
Quote:Aero(Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency?)(300 OM)

The Black Mage spins his hands across his wrists before bringing them together in a clapping motion, releasing a high-powered wind in a five meter wide cone in front of him. While only mildly damaging at best the attack comes out quick and throws significant force, knocking foes backward and away from the Black Mage to allow for some breathing room.

No worries, you don't need to include that line. I just wanted to state that as a 'for the record' deal, as you'd be surprised liberties people will take.

Black Mage Wrote:
Quote:Bio(Ranged, Debuff Proficiency) (300 OM)

The Black Mage conjures a .1 meter wide green bubble that emits a rancid odor and launches it at a foe. Travelling at a pace slightly slower than an arrow for around 10 meters the bubble gives a foe a mild pain comparable in flavor to an acid burn on contact, but also transfers a virus not unlike the "common cold". Actions and motion become more and more fatiguing, while other symptoms such as mild sneezing or headaches may develop with extraordinary fatigue. Symptoms in Primes generally worsen for around two to five minutes depending on the hardiness of the specimen before the symptoms gradually wear off in another two to five minutes. Exposure to multiple bubbles will not worsen symptoms, but will "reset" recovery time.

You're good.
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