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Official Move Approval III
Jaixe Furiael Wrote:
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Quote:Scythe Howl – 300 OM (Requires Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency)
[spoiler]Jaixe conjures an orb of black and violet energy in the palm of his hand. He holds his open palm out with the orb toward his target and makes a sweeping, or swiping motion in front of him from side to side. An explosive wave is generated from the orb in his palm and is cast outward as he sweeps his hand, creating a curved, flat, wave in the shape of a scythe blade that surges forward at the target. He can swipe vertically, diagonally, or horizontally, and etcetera, as long as the line he draws with that motion is straight. The wave will continue on its path and not deviate after it is cast.

The ability requires a charge-up time of three seconds. The ability can be held onto after charging, but this prevents him from using any other Moves while he holds it. If the orb is destroyed or dispelled, the ability is canceled without a return investment on the energy spent. The ability requires a mild investment of energy to cast, and has a twelve second cooldown in between uses. The arcing wave generated is five meters long, accounting for the curvature of the wave, and one-half of a meter tall (.5 meters). It travels at a speed akin to that of an arrow, at around one-hundred and forty meters per second.

When the wave hits something in its path, the segment of the wave that made contact with the object detonates with a violent pulse of black and violet energy. The segments of the wave which did not make contact continue onward, along that segment's original path until it does impact with something. This means that blocking or the use of cover will stop the wave, but the covering object may take damage from the hit. If the block or cover did not completely intercept the entirety of the wave, it is possible that an unblocked segment could hit its intended target.[/spoiler]

With the moves dimensions, when you say 6 meters long, you mean from curved point to point right? Also when you refer to it's height, do you mean how thick the wave of energy is? This also Requires Ranged Proficiency. Also, don't you think six meters is a bit large? considering that the average person is roughly one third of that size. You can keep it if that's what you want. I'm just here to make sure Tongue

Well, the point of it is to ASPLODE groupings of enemies or wash over cover with some amount of ease, though with flaws in either case. So the size is useful for that fact. And yes, I do mean from curved point to curved point, it says "accounting for the curvature of the wave," so you don't ignore the curve, you include it. And height would be thickness, yes. Also, the proficiency was a slight error on my part. I fixed that. I knocked it down to five meters this time. I'd rather keep it at that, at least.[/qoute]

So six meters long and half a meter tall, correct? If those are the dimensions, this looks solid to me.
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