Official Move Approval III

[Ash]

TOO SPREAD OUT! xD

Starting with Stunning Choker:
-I will edit in the required Proficiency(s), but do have both.
-The shock instantaneous and only for an instant, as that feels like enough time to transfer the electricity to the spinal cord where I think the stunning would be most effectively directed.
-How long is the stun? Uh.. 8 seconds? (Its hard to find that sweet spot when stunning someone is effective but not too long.)

The Storm Demon's Calamity and Cataclysm:
-Firing Rate: Both Hand Guns fire at the rate of 1 per 2 seconds; For the Sniper Rifle there's a lot of planning to a careful shot, but in the case she might need multiple shots, 1 per 3 seconds, and the Shotgun 1 per 2 seconds.
-Summoning: If she summons them both its 5 minutes, if separated, its 3 minutes.
-Engaging: Calamity(Shotgun) Takes 30 seconds, so she can be used in the battlefield, however Cataclysm(Sniper) takes a whole minute to transform. (And on that note, I want to reduce the time limit for the guns to only 3 minutes)


Debuff
While I am sad about no randomly chosen Debuffs, I understand. So instead, I will submit the ideas in ammo types, if I may.
(This would change Calamity a bit too.)
Blood Trail (Requires Debuff Proficiency and The Storm Demon's Calamity)- 300 OM
In true Calamity fashion, theses shots are especially harsh and even the littlest flesh wound created by these shots take 3 times longer to heal and will continue to leave a trail of blood behind, making it hard for the inflicted to hide.

Revised:
The Storm Demon's Calamity (Ranged Weapon Prof.)(600 OM)
Dormant( = 300 OM): Calamity is a hand gun designed, created, and summoned by Ash, from the depths of her mind. Its a sleek, slim, technological marvel. Its appearance seems straight out of sci-fi comic, long black barrel with slender white stripes. The grip was not only white and comfortable in her hand, but was lined with a finger print scanner, requiring some reprogramming if ever stolen. - Good luck with that. - The mini computer inside the gun requires the appropriate finger prints before it will fire, meaning its saftey is always online until Ash - Whom is the gun's current programmed shooter - intends to use it. Shock Proof and Water Resistant makes this gun hard to beat. She can fire from short to mid-range without loosing accuracy or speed, and requires reloading after 15 shots. Superior to her sister Catalyst because of the added benefit of Debuffs.(They are on equal footing now.)
Engaged( = 300 OM): Calamity requires sacrificed energy to transform from the operator, and then can be only used for three minutes before reverting and needing another charge. This is achieved by Ash sticking herself with a needle that is located on the right side where the safety switch would be. Which only react to her D.N.A. as long as she is the programmed operator.
30 Seconds after sticking herself with the needle, Calamity changes into a shot gun which can only fire the remaining of the clip and cannot be reloaded until she reverts back in three minutes. Turning her into a short-range specialty weapon with more power and damage.
Apperance:
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