Move Creation Workshop

[Roger Smith]

Immortality Technique – Genesis Transfusion
Cost: 600om
Requires: Super Utility Tier 1, Regeneration (Basic), Twin Sacrificial Rebirth (Move), Hive Mind
Targeting a preexisting clone/doll under the user’s control or taking the time to perform the hand seals and chakra molding associated with said technique, the user is able to relieve themselves of their body and take this new body as their own. This results in their leaving behind the old body, and any damage it may have taken, and it being able to serve as Clone/Doll vessel for a persona as per the mechanics of Twin Sacrificial Rebirth.

The wording of the Twin Sacrificial Rebirth confuses the hell out of me, so I'm having a hard time tracking what it is. It sounds like a clone that can't fight, because that'd be an Assist?

But, back to this one, it seems as though you're removing ALL damage that's dealt to you with this move, which seems extreme, especially for a Tier 1. I might suggest that you put SOME of the damage onto the clone? Like, the clone absorbs some of the damage, maybe either "Up to X damage" or "for X% of her total damage". Both options are more useful in certain situations. I'd personally say, "Up to 4 Damage" or "for 25% of all current damage."

I have to use an assist to power them up for combat, but yeah that's the general idea. Otherwise they are just highly useful secondaries.

How about, "At minimum heals 4 Damage and a maximum of 25% of total."

Just butting in here to say that since the maximum damage you can possibly accumulate without being dead is 19, that 4 Damage or 25% of current damage is about the same, differing only by a possible 1 point if you're literally on the verge of death with 19 Damage. Might want to tone down the minimum or remove it altogether. Or swap the numbers around. 25% of her current Damage up to a maximum of 4, or something.