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Official Move Approval III
Strazio Rockwell Wrote:Bumping this

Strazio Rockwell Wrote:Here are some moves for Strazio I'm looking to get approved

Cauterize (300)

[spoiler]Strazio control over energy allows him to sacrifice his own flesh for the explosive power within. He can do this on a much smaller scale and release a very small about of energy, enough to sear his own skin. When he is injured with a laceration or an open wound he can spend about two seconds concentrating, during which he can move but cannot attack. During these two seconds the cells around the open edge of the wound explode and cauterize the nearby cells, effectively sealing the blood vessels and staunching the flow of blood. This doesn't actually heal Strazio, and in fact might even impeded the later healing of certain wounds, all this does is staunch blood loss.[/spoiler]

Cataclysm (1000) Tier 1 Assist

[spoiler]ATK 2
DEF 0
SPD 2
TEC 1

After several moments of concentration several sinders (white-hot orbs of energy) spark and explode off Strazio. He creates 100 of these small orbs, only about three inches in diameter. These orbs attempt to stay within a twenty meter radius of Strazio. These sinders expire after getting hit by any attack, making area abilities very very effective against them. They can only cast Shatter, Shockwave, and Detonate and after attacking the sinder dissipates. These are mainly used as area control against fast melee enemies, creating a dangerous zone around Strazio.[/spoiler]

Overcharge (300) Physical Strength

[spoiler]Strazio momentarily pumps energy into his muscles, supercharging them and pushing them past the normal human limits. For five seconds Strazio's physical strength becomes insane, allowing him to lift and throw things far beyond his normal ability. This ability has no charge-up time, but it is incredibly draining and damaging to Strazio's body. After the effect fades, Strazio's muscles are ravaged and he physically becomes much weaker and moves slower than normal. He can only activate Overcharge once per fight unless he opts to take 2 points of damage at which point he can activate it again. Every activation after the first magnifies the refractory period and doesn't strengthen him as much as the original activation.[/spoiler]

Here is a move for Renji my alt.

Demon Lotus (600) Tier 1 Defensive Super Move - Physical Strength, Foresight, Enhanced Senses

[spoiler]Renji is unable to activate the Demon Lotus consciously. Instead the demon that possesses his body is on constant vigilance, ready to take temporary control over Renji's body in order to protect him. Should the demon notice an incoming super move, it'll take control of Renji's body and defend against the attack. Hundreds of large blades erupt from Renji in the direction of the attack, creating a lotus pattern with the center ready to absorb the blast. Melee attackers will be damaged by the blades should they charge into them. Ranged attacks are absorbed and refracted from the demonic blades and the attack rendered harmless. After defending against the attack, the blades retract and Renji is returned to control of his body.
Something like this - <!-- m --><a class="postlink" href="https://youtu.be/-OAj3guPjMs?t=90">https://youtu.be/-OAj3guPjMs?t=90</a><!-- m -->[/spoiler]

Cauterize -- 300 is fine.
Cataclysm -- Good.
Overcharge -- I mean, this kind of sounds like a Transformation to me with its current wording?
Demon Flower -- Good.
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