Move Creation Workshop

[Thaal Sinestro]

Kagetsume's Third Form(Ranged attacks) 300OM+Forms 1&2=900OM

Kagetusme gains the ability to change into a sniper rifle. Dawnika must hold still whil aiming making her vulnerable if the opponent can close in on her quickly enough. In the form Kagetsume gets 3 bullet from on single clip so she can shoot only 3 times in one fight. After the fight Kagetsume naturally refills the chamber with thrre bullets.. Dawnika is extremely vulnerable in this form as she is completely immoble and has no way to defend herself with the out put of being able to deal great damage from a long range. Cannot be actively reloaded in battle. Takes 5 seconds to summon in battle.

Im not able to buy this yet, but I wanted some feedback.

Sounds fine. You don't NEED to make the transformation time 5 seconds, and you don't NEED to make the ammo size so small. They're great little additions to play with the narrative, just not required.