Fight Challenge: Dante vs. Zangetsu

[Thaal Sinestro]

Well, there we have it. It always tends to hit me when I see my work critiqued like this, but I appreciate that and your judging nonetheless, Sinestro.

I'll have up a following post in due time.

It can be a blow sometimes, but realize that your writing isn't BAD. It's not bad at all. Hell, even if it was, don't take it to heart. All of us, each and every one, can only improve through practice and study. You're doing great, and you'll improve vastly as a writer the more you go after it!

That goes for both of you.

I remember when I started writing online competitively, I was... a mess. It wasn't as good as you guys are writing, so you're already beyond where I was when I had my first fight.