Fight Challenge: Dante vs. Zangetsu

[Thaal Sinestro]

As a quick PS to both of you:

Onomatopoeia are not usually good for writing sounds a character makes.

For the first time since coming here, this was the first time he found himself without words that weren't "aghghhg" or other noise synonymous with pain, but not for a lack of trying.

And

"HHHRRRAAAAHHH!!"

In both of these cases, DESCRIBING the words would have been FAR better. As it stands they see weird and out of place, breaking the flow of the sentence and the tension of a moment, respectively.

There ARE times when sound effects can be used effectively, but their use is very dependent on the moment and on the scene. Be careful with them in the future.