09-22-2015, 11:06 PM
Everything here looks good, but the move you put up here wouldn't really need to be bought, but since you said it requires more movement and power than just regular slashes, it will count as a move. However, it's price and description are fine. I would, however, add in how many slashes this move consists of (just for clarity's sake).
Your sword needs to be a move itself - Pricing and Writing moves - as weapons themselves are classed as separate moves. A basic sword is generally counted as a basic move, but I will need you to describe the sword itself in the description.
Your sword needs to be a move itself - Pricing and Writing moves - as weapons themselves are classed as separate moves. A basic sword is generally counted as a basic move, but I will need you to describe the sword itself in the description.

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