Official Move Approval III

[Proto Man]

Twin Hatchets - 300 OM - Requires Physical Proficiency

A pair of sturdy iron hand axes with pointed reverse ends, each with a wrapped linen grip and only around two and a half feet long. While lightweight and well-suited for rapid strikes, such tools are ill-suited to simple brute force, being better used for sweeping foliage, climbing or fighting in narrow spaces.

Good.

Stun Grenade - 300 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency and Debuff Proficiency

A reliable non-lethal weapon, the Stun Grenade has earned its reputation as a tool of bounty hunters and law enforcement. Shaped like a small dark grey disk, upon forceful impact with a surface, the trap lets out a large and carefully calibrated arc of electricity across a five-meter range. As the arcs of energy course through the target's nervous system, they fall to their knees, writhing for some time as their muscles contract. Of course, on targets that lack nervous or muscular systems such things will have little-to-no effect.

What effect does this have on primes (ie - be more specific)

Long-Las - 600 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency

A modified version of the standard-issue scoped Long-las, designed for larger hands. Being an energy-based weapon with a maximum effective range of around a kilometer, it is ideal for sniping due to the lack of bullet drop, long and reliability of the firing mechanism. In spite of these advantages though, the sheer heat of the beams fired easily wear out the extended barrel, so it requires frequent replacement. In absence of the specialized "hot shot" ammunition and extended barrel required for sniping, the Long-las can also be modified easily and loaded with normal lasgun batteries, drastically lowering damage and lowering range somewhat in exchange for increased rate-of-fire, shot capacity and an immense boost to reliability due to the simpler nature of the standard barrel and battery designs..

So the standard version sacrifices rate of fire and clip size for being stronger than a normal bullet? (asking this for clarity)

Wall of Steel - Tier 1 Defensive Super Move - Requires Physical Strength

Tartaros grabs onto his blade with both hands, before leaping forwards, slashing back and forth like a madman and creating a wall of razor-sharp swipes. However there is a subtle method to the madness, advancing at an extremely slow pace as the rapid strikes in front of him protect from most potential attacks from the front and sides. However, the wanderer's concentration can be thrown by more advanced or simply numerous attacks.

Good.

Combat Shotgun - 600 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency

A pump shotgun, the weapon of choice for Imperial Guard drop troops, sappers and law enforcers. While not particularly adorned or specialized in any manner, the mechanism for the firearm is extremely simple and reliable, with malfunctions such as jams being an extreme rarity, even in the most hostile environments. While commonly loaded loaded with eight buckshot shells at a time, the shotgun can also be loaded with large brass-coated slugs, trading spread and loading speed for extra accuracy and damage.

So a shotgun? Solid. Approved.

Cluster Grenade - 300 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency and Area Attack Proficiency

A commonly used anti-personnel explosive, the Mark VI cluster bomb can be a brutally effective tool when used against large groups of infantry, or as a harassment tool against armoured vehicles. Simplistic in concept, the explosive functions in much the same way as a normal fragmentation grenade, though with shells of highly concentrated napam jelly dispersed throughout the explosive materials that make up much of the grenade's structure. The resulting ignition causes the small projectiles to catch alight and be launched in across the 10 meter effective range of the blast, easily passing through wood and hide, though blocked rather easily by steel or concrete. While such a weapon is potentially devastating in the right hands, the results of an early ignition or a poor throw are obviously punishing.

Seems fine to me.