Bandit With No Name

[Thaal Sinestro]

Interesting concept. I'm not sure if we've had anyone turn their secondary NPC into a Prime before, but it's quite awesome to see it happen.

That said, your app needs some revisions. Your spent OM currently exceeds the 5000 you have available; specifically, your current Spent OM is 5200, so you'll need to either change or remove something. Also, you'll need to add the laser rifle's effective range.

Lastly, I'm not sure you really need to buy Steel Armor as a move. We usually treat armour as essentially a representation of your DEF. And if all you'll be doing in melee is using your fists, that is already covered by the Physical Strength proficiency. Does it have any special or unusual qualities that would make your attacks more powerful or change their nature, such as armour spikes?

EDIT: Also, even though you purchased a stat upgrade, your stat points are still only a total of 10.

Yeah, I spaced on the Super Speed!

Totally forgot the range. The Steel Armor adds to her punches in the same way as brass knuckles would, so I figured it was at least worth mentioning?

EDIT: I also didn't add it cause I figured it would be a sort of "after the fact" thing and that I should mark down her "original" stats first. Thanks!!