09-09-2015, 12:01 AM
Hey, Nice job with the Join App 
Just a few things though.
With your move, Bang!, are you sure you want that 20 seconds charge time? I feel like that's a little too long (for a basic move) and would actually be somewhat of a hindrance. You can make it much shorter if you wish, or you can keep it, I just wanted to make sure that this was what you want. Another thing is, how fast is this electrical projectile? does it travel at the normal rate of a bullet/arrow? etc.
The physical description does say for Originals only, but it's always a good Idea to include at least an Image of your character and maybe how tall your character is.
Just a few things though.
With your move, Bang!, are you sure you want that 20 seconds charge time? I feel like that's a little too long (for a basic move) and would actually be somewhat of a hindrance. You can make it much shorter if you wish, or you can keep it, I just wanted to make sure that this was what you want. Another thing is, how fast is this electrical projectile? does it travel at the normal rate of a bullet/arrow? etc.
The physical description does say for Originals only, but it's always a good Idea to include at least an Image of your character and maybe how tall your character is.
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