09-07-2015, 11:13 AM
Ah, well, you'd definitely need Area Shield prof for this. and I can definitely see why it got left out, it is vague, and seemed much more like something that needs to be worked on a little more. It's also not written up properly, which makes it hard to approve.
I would write it up as something like this;
Resist Damage (Area Shield Proficiency) (300 OM) - After x seconds of concetrating and complete stillness Makoto is able to create a thin yet sturdy barrier in front of his entire body. This barrier is roughly x feet wide and x feet tall and has the appearance of glass. Once this move takes a sufficient amount of damage, it will shatter into glass like pieces before disintegrating into nothing. the only down side to this is that Makoto must remain completely still for this move to remain effective, otherwise the barrier will become brittle and shatter after first impact.
Of course you could also opt for it to be a super defense, in which case it would be a much stronger move.
I would write it up as something like this;
Resist Damage (Area Shield Proficiency) (300 OM) - After x seconds of concetrating and complete stillness Makoto is able to create a thin yet sturdy barrier in front of his entire body. This barrier is roughly x feet wide and x feet tall and has the appearance of glass. Once this move takes a sufficient amount of damage, it will shatter into glass like pieces before disintegrating into nothing. the only down side to this is that Makoto must remain completely still for this move to remain effective, otherwise the barrier will become brittle and shatter after first impact.
Of course you could also opt for it to be a super defense, in which case it would be a much stronger move.
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