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Official Move Approval III
Enzo Matrix Wrote:
Minato Namikaze Wrote:
Enzo Matrix Wrote:Trident - 300 OM
Requires Physical Strength

A three pronged spear that measures about six feet long. It is lightweight and easy to maneuver around, but at the same time is sturdy enough to withstand constant direct blows. When not in use, it collapses to a small stick that is about the size of a fist for easy storage on a belt or somewhere similar. With the press of a small button it can be extended or retracted between sizes, with a locking mechanism to prevent accidental deployment both in and out of battle. Deploying the weapon as well as sheathing it takes only one second. This is AndrAIa's weapon of choice, but Matrix is skilled with it as well and she will sometimes loan it to him.

Just to be clear, can this be used as a weapon while in it's small form? or is it only weaponized while it is extended to it's full size?

No, the small form is only for storage purposes. Similar concept as a lightsaber when its turned off.
Approved at 300 OM

Enzo Matrix Wrote:Assist: Tier 1 - 1000 OM
AndrAIa
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ATK: 1
DEF: 1
SPD: 1
TEC: 2
Approved

Tartaros Wrote:
Minato Namikaze Wrote:
Tartaros Wrote:Hallowed Protection - 300 OM - Requires Area Shield Proficiency, Physical Strength

A rectangular shield of rough iron, engraved with an ancient prayer and only slightly longer than one's forearm. While otherwise unremarkable, with the utterance of a short invocation it can provide protection against simple magics for the user for a short while.

The shield you described doesn't really fit the area shield proficiency checklist, and what I mean by that you wouldn't actually need the mentioned proficiency to use the move, as it sounds like the shield is rather small. 'slightly longer than one's forearm'. Another thing to mention is that a move can't be specifically good or bad against specific things. So you'll need to remove the part about providing protection against magics, unless that part is purely an RP fodder term to describe all moves, in which case that would be fine.

I've revised the description slightly to be more fitting with the Area Shield Proficiency, and yes, the "protection against simple magics" thing is just RP fodder to encompass any basic move.

Quote:Hallowed Protection - 300 OM - Requires Area Shield Proficiency, Physical Strength

A rectangular shield of heavy iron, engraved with an ancient prayer and roughly large enough to cover one's torso and upper legs. While otherwise unremarkable, with the utterance of a short invocation it can provide protection against simple magics for the user for a short while.
Approved at 300OM
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