Official Move Approval III

[Tartaros]

Hallowed Protection - 300 OM - Requires Area Shield Proficiency, Physical Strength

A rectangular shield of rough iron, engraved with an ancient prayer and only slightly longer than one's forearm. While otherwise unremarkable, with the utterance of a short invocation it can provide protection against simple magics for the user for a short while.

The shield you described doesn't really fit the area shield proficiency checklist, and what I mean by that you wouldn't actually need the mentioned proficiency to use the move, as it sounds like the shield is rather small. 'slightly longer than one's forearm'. Another thing to mention is that a move can't be specifically good or bad against specific things. So you'll need to remove the part about providing protection against magics, unless that part is purely an RP fodder term to describe all moves, in which case that would be fine.

I've revised the description slightly to be more fitting with the Area Shield Proficiency, and yes, the "protection against simple magics" thing is just RP fodder to encompass any basic move.

Hallowed Protection - 300 OM - Requires Area Shield Proficiency, Physical Strength

A rectangular shield of heavy iron, engraved with an ancient prayer and roughly large enough to cover one's torso and upper legs. While otherwise unremarkable, with the utterance of a short invocation it can provide protection against simple magics for the user for a short while.