09-06-2015, 08:51 AM
Most of this looks fine, but two things:
1. You need to mention from what point in history the character is taken from.
2. Since all your moves are straightforward melee weapons, the descriptions are mostly fine as is. However, I would like you to add how quickly one can attack with them.
1. You need to mention from what point in history the character is taken from.
2. Since all your moves are straightforward melee weapons, the descriptions are mostly fine as is. However, I would like you to add how quickly one can attack with them.
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