Official Move Approval III

[Minato Namikaze]

Black Iron Blade - 300 OM - Requires Physical Strength and Area Attack Proficiency

An unadorned and simplistic longsword of approximately six feet in length, given its name from the dark grey patterns in the blade caused by the pattern-welding forging method and multiple alloys used in its creation. While a rather large, durable and somewhat intimidating weapon, its small guard can be broken through or slid past with sufficient force, and its size can make its use in cramped areas difficult.

Just a basic sword? This seems fine to me. Approved at 300 OM

Hallowed Protection - 300 OM - Requires Area Shield Proficiency, Physical Strength

A rectangular shield of rough iron, engraved with an ancient prayer and only slightly longer than one's forearm. While otherwise unremarkable, with the utterance of a short invocation it can provide protection against simple magics for the user for a short while.

The shield you described doesn't really fit the area shield proficiency checklist, and what I mean by that you wouldn't actually need the mentioned proficiency to use the move, as it sounds like the shield is rather small. 'slightly longer than one's forearm'. Another thing to mention is that a move can't be specifically good or bad against specific things. So you'll need to remove the part about providing protection against magics, unless that part is purely an RP fodder term to describe all moves, in which case that would be fine.

Leaping Strike - 600 OM - Requires Physical Strength, Burst Movement and Super Jumping (Basic) or higher

Tartaros leaps into the air or charges across the ground, clasping whatever weapon which is at hand tightly, before crashing down onto his target. While a very damaging attack, any sort of regular use can be a strain on the users body, and in very tight corridors, use of the attack would be borderline-impossible.

This move doesn't need to be 600 OM as it is only doing one thing. You can execute a move in different ways, for example, I could have Minato teleport to his opponent with a Rasengan, or I could have him run at his opponent with his Rasengan, but the Rasengan itself is still costs 300. With that said, Approved at 300 OM

Note: I have left out Cluster Grenade and Combat Shotgun as I am not sure about those and will leave them for another staff member.