Move Creation Workshop

[Minato Namikaze]

Probably need to say how large an area Raal can pull the sulfur from, also, this move would probably cost 900 OM because you have the last two options of charging it, also, eye level is a relative term, is it Raal's eye level? or is it the average person's eye level?

Like the actual area of effect, a diameter of about ten feet. Though it wouldn't actually effect the environment or damage any part of it due to pulling the sulphur or be environmentally dependent due to that being against da R00ls.
For "eye level" I was going with about 1.7 meters, but kinda posted it that way to give short characters a non-disadvantage just by their size. On the other hand that's kinda unfair against growth users so I guess I'd go with about 1.7 meters(average male human height)
And that's about what I expected.

You haven't listed why this would cost 600 OM I mean sure it catches people on fire when it hits, but that's really only one effect, not two variable effects. can people catch it and avoid it being shattered? or does it break on cantact with anything other than Raal?

Twas due to it not actually taxing Raal's mana reserves.
It's a very fragile bottle, so it'd be pretty much impossible for, after Raal throws it, an opponent to catch it and not shatter it due to the sudden stop producing enough force to shatter it.. Minimum falling speed is more than enough to cause it to shatter though if someone slowed it down gradually to a crawl I'd imagine you could prevent it from breaking. One of the main reasons Raal isn't foolish enough to carry more than one on his flammable person.

Is there a max range for this attack? if so what is it? also, does Raal have to have any casting/ concentration time to begin this move? and if Raal is attacked while the shadow homes in on it's target, does the move fail?

Max range is about 50 meters.
Raal needs to focus for about a second to cast the move, but past that it is autonomous.

Okey dokey, well, this isn't move approval, and I don't have the power to approve moves :3 so now all you need to do is make the changes you feel necessary and hope they get approved