Move Creation Workshop

[Minato Namikaze]

Storm (300) (Requires Ranged Materialize, Area Attack, Ranged and Homing): Focusing his magical prowess in a window of ten seconds, Ludwig summons an wide area of storm clouds to surround the field before an array of lightning rains down to strike down multiple targets for critical damage. As a drawback, he must have full concentration or else it will not form correctly and dissipate.

You will need to decide on how large the storm area is, and also decide on how many lightning bolts will strike the ground, also, do the lightning bolts home in on the enemy themselves, or the area they were standing? just wondering because I thought about what sort of ways a person could dodge the lightning strikes if they were able to anticipate them.

Umbra Dissonantia (600) (Requires Ranged, Debuff, Ranged Materialized and Homing): For a window of several seconds, Ludwig channels his magical energy to create a magic circle to summon formless shadow manifestations as they instantaneously attack multiple targets on field for moderate damage; may cause confusion as an aftereffect. As a drawback, he must have full concentration or else it will not form correctly and dissipate.

It's always a good idea to come up with a set number of seconds, as 'several' could change, it could be 4 seconds or maybe 7. How large is this magical circle? how many shadow manifestations? can they be attacked and will they dissipate when struck?

Poison Cloud - (Requires Ranged proficiency, area of effect, Ranged materialize,Debuff proficiency)
One of Raal's strongest basic moves, and the most destructive spell of the orcish warlocks of the first war.
With this ability, Raal Pulls a large quantity of Heated sulfur from the ground underneath a selected area, taking five seconds of focused concentration to do this. The substance comes from the ground in the form of a purple cloud with a diameter of ten feet. The cloud both burns and poisons those within it, making it intensely difficult to breathe.
The cloud takes roughly two seconds to come up to eye level, however, meaning that even those who are initially caught in the cloud may escape it with merely burns.
Raal is capable of channeling for another five seconds to increase the overall size of the cloud by 1.5, and another 10 seconds to increase it's size by double.

Probably need to say how large an area Raal can pull the sulfur from, also, this move would probably cost 900 OM because you have the last two options of charging it, also, eye level is a relative term, is it Raal's eye level? or is it the average person's eye level?

Troll bomb (requires Ranged proficiency, Debuff proficiency) (600 OM)
Based on secrets and alchemy Raal learned from the trolls themselves, this weapon is a simple bottle with a concoction known as "liquid fire" within it. The bottle can be thrown and broken in order to cause an explosion of flammable liquid that easily catches opponent's on fire. The area of effect for the attack is quite small - only one meter in radius - meaning that Raal needs to aim well with it.
Using the Troll Bomb does not take any of Raal's mana, meaning it hardly tires him out at all. However, due to lacking any specialized pouch for them, Raal only ever carries one of these at a time, making them quite limited in terms of use.

You haven't listed why this would cost 600 OM I mean sure it catches people on fire when it hits, but that's really only one effect, not two variable effects. can people catch it and avoid it being shattered? or does it break on cantact with anything other than Raal?

Winding Shadow snake spear: (requires homing proficiency, Ranged proficiency)
an original ability of Raal's own creation, this spell was learned by the Death knight by examining the main attack of the necrolytes of the first war.
a long shadow extends out from Raal's, seemingly moving of it's own volition and snaking a crooked, s-shaped pathway across the ground towards the target. While on the ground, it moves at the speed of the average man at a fast run (15 MPH) until it's within a quarter of a meter of it's target. At this point the shadow, suddenly forms itself into a black spear, snaking upwards at the speed of a crossbow bolt for the neck(or similar area) of it's intended target, attempting to cut their throat in half.

Is there a max range for this attack? if so what is it? also, does Raal have to have any casting/ concentration time to begin this move? and if Raal is attacked while the shadow homes in on it's target, does the move fail?