08-28-2015, 11:18 AM
Hrm, Bio materia, specifically the poison aspect can be tricky, considering that I haven't really seen a move on this site that has utilized poison... But if I were to go about it, I'd go with 1 of two options.
Bio Materia (Ranged Materialize, Debuff) (300) - Zack utilizes his Bio materia to summon a small amount of green, bio chemical waste above his opponents head that is then dropped onto them. This waste appears in the form of a green, slime-like ooze that is mostly clear. The ooze has no effect on clothing and weaponry, but will automatically begin to seep through the clothing and onto the skin beneath it. Once the ooze touches the skin, it begins to slowly 'eat' through the layers of the skin, causing severe pain, discomfort and some movement impairments on affected areas. The rate at which it eats through skin is very slow. It would probably take weeks for the ooze to actually reach bone, but the pain and discomfort it causes is more than enough to warrant immediate removal. Removal is fairly easy as the ooze does not stick to the skin, and can be shaken of quite easily.
This idea came to me because there are quite the amount of toxins/ venom out there that just eat through skin, and I thought this would be a neat way to go about this sort of Move. Of course this isn't perfectly written out and is quick, you would need to add in a time of casting/ re casting and change it to how you see fit. Meanwhile, another Idea I had is quite different;
Bio Materia (Ranged Materialize, Debuff) (300) - Zack utilizes his Bio Materia to create 3 meter in diameter cloud of toxic gas around his opponent. This gas, if breathed in, causes dizziness, slight loss of sight and motor skills, as well as causing slight damage to the rest of the body (as the poisonous air travels through the blood stream). However, if the target is aware of what is going on, they are able to just not breathe, rendering the poisonous gas field useless. They can then just move outside of the gas area and continue unhindered by the toxic fumes.
Again, the second move idea will probably need a little work (I'm not going to do it all for you!), but I just hope this helped a little :3
Bio Materia (Ranged Materialize, Debuff) (300) - Zack utilizes his Bio materia to summon a small amount of green, bio chemical waste above his opponents head that is then dropped onto them. This waste appears in the form of a green, slime-like ooze that is mostly clear. The ooze has no effect on clothing and weaponry, but will automatically begin to seep through the clothing and onto the skin beneath it. Once the ooze touches the skin, it begins to slowly 'eat' through the layers of the skin, causing severe pain, discomfort and some movement impairments on affected areas. The rate at which it eats through skin is very slow. It would probably take weeks for the ooze to actually reach bone, but the pain and discomfort it causes is more than enough to warrant immediate removal. Removal is fairly easy as the ooze does not stick to the skin, and can be shaken of quite easily.
This idea came to me because there are quite the amount of toxins/ venom out there that just eat through skin, and I thought this would be a neat way to go about this sort of Move. Of course this isn't perfectly written out and is quick, you would need to add in a time of casting/ re casting and change it to how you see fit. Meanwhile, another Idea I had is quite different;
Bio Materia (Ranged Materialize, Debuff) (300) - Zack utilizes his Bio Materia to create 3 meter in diameter cloud of toxic gas around his opponent. This gas, if breathed in, causes dizziness, slight loss of sight and motor skills, as well as causing slight damage to the rest of the body (as the poisonous air travels through the blood stream). However, if the target is aware of what is going on, they are able to just not breathe, rendering the poisonous gas field useless. They can then just move outside of the gas area and continue unhindered by the toxic fumes.
Again, the second move idea will probably need a little work (I'm not going to do it all for you!), but I just hope this helped a little :3
