Secondary Saga Hints

[Gildarts]

I certainly wouldn't mind some feedback. Granted, I'm perfectly aware that all of my posts so far have been rushed and have suffered as a result. Still, another pair of eyes could bring attention to things I might have ignored.

You've been doing well! I don't have much advice to give you, just do your best to keep a story going, as well as maintain interest as competition will get intense this round.