Secondary Saga Hints

[Gildarts]

I always like to know where I can do better!

Fo' sho'

Personally, you are doing pretty well. And I love writing with you, if I had to suggest anything, just work on how the current situation might impact your character, as well as some things that might cause him to learn, grow, or change.

Some things you have excelled at so far are keeping the audience entertained as well as always participating and making your character important. Keep it up.

Happy writing~