08-23-2015, 11:32 PM
Yu Kanda Wrote:YESSSSS advice would be great.... have no clue where i am going wrong. Is it the stories i come up with ? the way i discribe things ? Or just the language barrier and i need to work on my grammer ... TELL MEEEE ^^ would appreciate the writing advice.
YOOU are doing pretty well!
Not sure why everyone thinks they are doing poorly
Alas, to cover a few bases:
You keep worrying about your grammar, but you are BILINGUAL. Don't sweat it. Keep the effort in and the flow will come.
I will say, I personally would love to see more emphasis on what distinguishes your character from the group. *Example* you applied this well when you showed leadership qualities.
Continuing with this, I myself have tried to differ my character from yours as they are similar by eventuating introspection.
Not much else comes to mind, though I suggest reading the above for any additional hints that could be helpful.
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