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Colonel Wrote:As chronically unsure about everything I do as I am, I would not say no to any manner of assistance in such a manner.

It's not that I feel as if I'm doing anything wrong, per se, so much as not doing right enough. I wish to attempt to alleviate that to some degree, if at all possible.

EDIT: This is, of course, Adam. Alt account magic.

I like what you are doing as Crow a lot.

As for suggestions, I have two things: 1 focus on something similar for what I said to Proto, I'd love to see how internally your character is progressing

Secondly, I'd like to see some action. You are doing well with interacting with other characters, personally I would like to see a bit more "Do" or how your character is being impacted/perceived by the others around him.
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