Secondary Saga Hints

[Gildarts]

Yes, Please. I keep getting frustrated. Some help would really be appreciated. Thanks

No frustrates!

To improve your score I can suggest: add a little more introspection, some of the best things about what intrigue the audience about your character are the little quirks that make them whole. It adds complexity, and makes their decisions seem to have more conviction. Remember to always proof read posts, and don't be afraid to do more action-y stuff!