08-22-2015, 08:41 PM
Proto Man Wrote:I can actually probably focus on a post without a dozen distractions, so yea, I'll take some advice.
Proto! So far you have been doing very well! If I were to suggest improving something I would lean towards character growth. TM is an interesting character, I would love to see more of how his experiences change him, or impact him.

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