08-16-2015, 10:33 AM
Two more quick things:
1. By adding Physical Strength, your spent OM is now 5100. You're gonna need to get rid of something.
2. Your move is a bit hazy to me. What exactly is Luger doing? Yeah, it's a stealth strike, and she grabs their neck, but I have no idea what she's actually doing during it besides that. Is she choking them? Does she hit a pressure point? Does she throw them on the ground by their neck? Also, right now it sounds like an insta-kill or an insta-KO, and keep in mind those aren't allowed. Also, it needs a downside or two.
Thanks, Jak/John/Luger!
1. By adding Physical Strength, your spent OM is now 5100. You're gonna need to get rid of something.
2. Your move is a bit hazy to me. What exactly is Luger doing? Yeah, it's a stealth strike, and she grabs their neck, but I have no idea what she's actually doing during it besides that. Is she choking them? Does she hit a pressure point? Does she throw them on the ground by their neck? Also, right now it sounds like an insta-kill or an insta-KO, and keep in mind those aren't allowed. Also, it needs a downside or two.
Thanks, Jak/John/Luger!
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