08-09-2015, 12:10 AM
Makoto Yuki Wrote:Strazio Rockwell Wrote:Makoto Yuki
[spoiler]Makoto Yuki Wrote:-Agidyne (600)(Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency):
An explosion of fire, remotely set off by Makoto. It's not especially powerful, but on the flipside the energy required is a relatively small amount and it can be used many times before tiring Makoto. It has a maximum effective range of approximately 60 meters. Casting speed is almost instantaneous, and it can be used against enemies which Makoto can see, or if they're invisible or otherwise hidden from his sight, he will try to estimate their location, using their last known one, though this doesn't always work.. Still and unmoving enemies will almost always be caught in its blast, while moving targets are trickier. Makoto usually tries to predict their current path and cast Agidyne to intercept them, but this doesn't always work against speedier opponents. It can be used against a single target resulting in a powerful explosion, or affect a bigger area, reducing it's damage but also increasing it's usefulness against weaker enemies or as a distraction.
When used, a persona may briefly appears behind Makoto. The persona then casts Agidyne and promptly disappears. The persona itself is a projection of Yuki's psyche, and has no physical mass. However, Makoto can choose to cast it regularly with a gesture or a spoken command.
Agidyne - This is more of a personal gripe then anything, but I'd try to make the description a bit more concise. How large of an area is the explosion for the single target and area-effect versions? How long does it take until the explosion actually goes off after it is casted? And is the persona bit only for flavor or does it serve a purpose?[/spoiler]
No, you're right about that, the post could stand to be trimmed down a bit.
-Agidyne (600)(Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency):
[spoiler]A fiery explosion that is detonated remotely, up to to a maximum range of 60 meters. It takes the shape of a rough sphere three feet in diameter, although Makoto can manipulate its shape and size, trading power for a wider area of effect. It detonates immediately after it is cast, and as such it isn't very powerful. The explosion's force is comparable to large caliber weapons. A few simultaneous shots will tire him out a little bit, while a full-on barrage will leave him gasping for breath.
Makoto may choose to materialize a persona which then casts the attack itself, either for a more theatrical effect or as a form of intimidation. The projected persona is otherwise useless.[/spoiler]
I say that, but I'm not sure how to make it less annoying to read without affecting required info...
Um, originally I was only supposed to tack that bit about a persona appearing at the end, but I ended up re-wording the whole thing. I hope it still counts as the same move, tell me if it doesn't.