08-08-2015, 11:45 PM
You're so fine, Ada, no worries! It's looking great so far, just so you know. Ada's a very cool character, I've just got a few questions looking the app over.
1. I'm going to assume that Ada is taken into the Omniverse and out of her homeworld upon her sacrificing herself. That sound right to you? If so, can you just make that clear in the history? Just a little tacked on bit at the end.
2. As far as Slash goes, let's go into some more details with it:
- Do the whips have a specific range?
- Omni can correct me if I'm wrong on this, but if the whips stay attached to her hands when she attacks an enemy, I think that would require Physical Strength instead of Ranged Attack Proficiency, just a note. Same cost, just switch that up if you would. (Nope, Ranged goes for whips too -Omni)
- You're gonna need to add a little bit more down-side to this. Adding a more specific range to this might suffice; if the whips can't reach too far, or if they open up Ava to attacks because her hands are busy conjuring the whips, then that would count as a down-side. You don't need much more since you already said it doesn't do much damage, but yeah.
- Also, I don't think deadly poison is going to fly; you're welcome to have the whips have harmful lasting effects, like perhaps causing the enemy to be disoriented, but anything labeled "deadly" or "fatal" probably is gonna have to go. Also, if you choose to have the whips do something like disorient the enemy, you're going to need to also purchase Debuff Proficiency and the move will raise to 600 OM because it has more than one use and therefore is variable.
So yeah, think about these little notes, tweak up your profile, and post again in here letting me know when you're done and I'll take another look! Also, if you have ANY questions, feel free to ask and me or another mod or member will certainly help you out as much as you need. Welcome to the Omniverse, Ada!
1. I'm going to assume that Ada is taken into the Omniverse and out of her homeworld upon her sacrificing herself. That sound right to you? If so, can you just make that clear in the history? Just a little tacked on bit at the end.
2. As far as Slash goes, let's go into some more details with it:
- Do the whips have a specific range?
- Omni can correct me if I'm wrong on this, but if the whips stay attached to her hands when she attacks an enemy, I think that would require Physical Strength instead of Ranged Attack Proficiency, just a note. Same cost, just switch that up if you would. (Nope, Ranged goes for whips too -Omni)
- You're gonna need to add a little bit more down-side to this. Adding a more specific range to this might suffice; if the whips can't reach too far, or if they open up Ava to attacks because her hands are busy conjuring the whips, then that would count as a down-side. You don't need much more since you already said it doesn't do much damage, but yeah.
- Also, I don't think deadly poison is going to fly; you're welcome to have the whips have harmful lasting effects, like perhaps causing the enemy to be disoriented, but anything labeled "deadly" or "fatal" probably is gonna have to go. Also, if you choose to have the whips do something like disorient the enemy, you're going to need to also purchase Debuff Proficiency and the move will raise to 600 OM because it has more than one use and therefore is variable.
So yeah, think about these little notes, tweak up your profile, and post again in here letting me know when you're done and I'll take another look! Also, if you have ANY questions, feel free to ask and me or another mod or member will certainly help you out as much as you need. Welcome to the Omniverse, Ada!
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