08-02-2015, 12:21 AM
Kenjiro Masters Wrote:Judgement: Mars Power - Tier 1 Super Move - 600(Requires Physical Strength):
Kamen Rider Olympus' arms glow red and grow to the thickness of watermelons, much like in Mars Force. however he then leaps and propels himself towards the enemy, using a great burst of steam from the back of his shoulders. Kenjiro then winds up his punch in mid-air until it glows red, then connecting with a resounding crash from the force of the punch, comparable to a jackhammer in comparison to the weaker version of this attack, Mars Force.
I still need to know a general speed of the propulsion. Or does it increase his speed at all? If it doesn't, it's approved. If it increases his speed, I need to know how fast he's going comparable to normal.
Quote:Judgement: Jupiter Burning(requires Physical Strength), 300:
Kamen Rider Olympus' body turns a golden yellow, and his armor's arms crackle with a latent electrical energy. While he courses this power through his body, his punches and grapples are given a paralysis-inducing electrical current. He then starts throwing a series of electricity-enhanced punches at his target, however the longer he induces this 'Burning' effect, the longer the current courses through and causes him to fatigue at a faster rate, wearing him out.
How's this look?
I need you to remove "and grapples" from that one sentence, as that's a different type of attack. Also, if the electrical current can paralyze, that'll also be a different function and add on to the cost.
Sorry to keep nit-picking, just wanna make sure you're not paying more than you want to!
EDIT: Being able to paralyze would also require Debuff Proficiency, just fyi.
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