Official Move Approval III

[Mickey Mouse]

I think you're gonna have to be a bit more specific with this. You can't just throw all physical attacks into one move; like, you have to have like a "Jupiter Burning Punch" and "Jupiter Burning Kick." If you try to stuff them all in one move then it's just going to end up being super expensive. So just separate, come up with specifics for each move, and resubmit.

I hope that make sense.

How fast does he propel himself forward? Also, and another staff member could usurp my judgment on this because #new, but I think having force comparable to being hit by an 18-wheeler is a bit much for a Tier 1 Super Move for a character with only 2 ATK.

Ahh, with Jupiter Burning I was imagining it just affected bare-fisted punches. Would it work if I specified a few punches and similar attacks that come along with said move? It wasn't meant to augment anything more then punches.

As for that last part...That was a bit of an exaggeration, I just kind of wanted to get across the force of the attack compared to it's normal form as Mars Force. Mars Force gives his punches something similar to a sledgehammer, but I suppose jumping from Sledgehammer to 18-wheeler is a bit of a stretch. The propulsion comes from the steam pouring out, but I could refluff it to him just leaping out at them with maybe a bit of jet propulsion from the back of the gauntlets.

If Jupiter Burning just affects punches, edit that into the description and it's approved at 300 OM. If it affects anything else it'll cost more.

Sledgehammer is much more reasonable, I think! Go ahead and work that into the description. And the propulsion is absolutely fine -- I have no problems with it being caused by the steam pouring out. I'd just like to know in general how fast he's propelled. If it's double his normal speed, it'll require Burst Movement or Super Speed depending on how far he can propel himself.