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Official Move Approval III
Minato and Nealaphh, I'm gonna let Omni handle you guys' moves since he already is in conversation with you about them.

Do-Domori Wrote:Counterspell - 300 OM, Area Shield Prof
This move only works against energy-based attacks (Fireballs, Kamehamehas: Yes, Gattling Punch, Boulder Throw: No). With a swift gesture, the user places an intangible magical barrier which neutralizes such attacks, in the shape of a large circular magical seal made of light. Its effectiveness depends on her DEF, and it may shatter if it sustains too much damage.

Can you give me an approximate size for the barrier?

Cyburn Wrote:Move: Exploding Bolt
A crossbow bolt that explodes when it hits something. It fits inside of bolt slots in a crossbow. The explosion is fiery and has a radius of five feet. It requires standard aiming with the crossbow, and can does not home in on targets. An exception to aiming is if the target is at point blank range in which the shot can be fired quickly.

This move requires ranged proficiency and area attack proficiency.

Price, 300 OM

If you fire the crossbow bolt at point blank range and it explodes on the target, is Cyburn also injured since he's within the five foot radius? How quickly can Cyburn reload the crossbow? Are multiple bolts loaded at one time?

Doomguy Wrote:Berzerk Pack (Tier 2 Power Up) 1500 Om
A volatile concoction of stimm, strength enhancers, steroids, and god knows what else, delivered in syringe form and contained in a grey black medkit with enough warnings to scare off but the most badass (or desperate) soldier. Once injected, it gives the user superhuman strength, dulls pain, and drives them into the combat drug's infamous seeing-red rage that turns them into a frothing berzerker hellbent on painting the world with blood. A single punch can break bones and tear flesh, bend steel and shatter concrete, and even demons cannot weather the assault for long. Doomguy himself has used this unholy chemical cocktail to rip enemies in half, punch through their rib cages, tear off their heads, and even removed the spines from demons with his bare hands. While the threats and insane babble he continuously shouts while under the effects of berzerk makes it sound like he's completely off his rocker, he still keeps the devious cunning while under the rage.

ARK: +5
DEF: +3
SPD: +2
TEC: +0

Approved at 1500 OM.

Kenjiro Masters Wrote:Two moves I wanted to try and get past, but couldn't put in my character creation due to not knowing if they're kosher

Judgement: Jupiter Burning(requires Physical Strength), 300:
Kamen Rider Olympus' body turns a golden yellow, and his armor's arms crackle with a latent electrical energy. While he courses this power through his body, his punches and grapples are given a paralysis-inducing electrical current. He then moves in and starts fighting normally, however the longer he induces this 'Burning' effect, the longer the current courses through and causes him to fatigue at a faster rate, wearing him out.

I think you're gonna have to be a bit more specific with this. You can't just throw all physical attacks into one move; like, you have to have like a "Jupiter Burning Punch" and "Jupiter Burning Kick." If you try to stuff them all in one move then it's just going to end up being super expensive. So just separate, come up with specifics for each move, and resubmit.

I hope that make sense.

Kenjiro Masters Wrote:Also, this

Judgement: Mars Power - Tier 1 Super Move - 600(Requires Physical Strength):
Kamen Rider Olympus' arms glow red and grow to the thickness of watermelons, much like in Mars Force. however he then propels himself towards the enemy with a great burst of steam from the back of his shoulders, winding up his fist in mid-air until it glows red, then connecting with an attack that has the comparable force to being hit by an 18-wheeler truck.

These both were a bit difficult for me to figure out, so, that's why I waited till now to try and get them approved.

How fast does he propel himself forward? Also, and another staff member could usurp my judgment on this because #new, but I think having force comparable to being hit by an 18-wheeler is a bit much for a Tier 1 Super Move for a character with only 2 ATK.
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