SAAP-J Codename Regina (Gender Changed)

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I apologise for not getting to your application sooner. However, next time, please post in the Help Desk if you want to draw staff's attention to your request(s). Don't spam all across the forum about it and certainly not in other people's rosters.

Since your character is your own creation, even if he comes from a universe that is a crossover between two established universes, your character source would count as original. So you should write something along lines on 'Ghost in the Shell x Pacific Rim/Original.'

I'm not sure I entirely understand your description of the Jaegar Sword. What exactly do you mean when you say it does 'only as much damage as whatever it cuts'? Do you mean to suggest that the Sword's strength depends on the material its target is made from? Also, since it can turn into a whip, that would qualify as another function and thus would increase the cost of the move to 600 OM.

The Single Shot mode can't be both incredibly powerful and incredibly fast; it also needs a downside other than just a cooldown period, like perhaps massive energy drain. Also, you should remove the percentage chances; we generally avoid dealing with RNG here whenever possible.

The description of Full Auto also confuses me. Does it fire 2x faster or 4x faster? And again, remove the percentage chances.

EDIT: Oh and before I forget, you need to provide an approximate range for the Blaster.