From Dust Feedback

[Ruby Rose]

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I will make most, if not all, of the changes you suggested (I also thought that I said there were blades on the rifles, but it seems not xD)

However;

[spoiler]I need to get stronger; to take out who created me, and then move onto the bloody ringleader himself, he complained as he sheathed his gunblades behind him. He extended his arms out at his rear and rose to a standing position. He slid his hands into his pockets as he pivoted and made his way back to his hut.[/spoiler]
Is he thinking the complaint to himself, is he saying it out loud? If he's saying it, quotation marks are a must. If he's thinking it, using italics or even still using quotations and then clarifying that it was a thought. Either way, we need to know the difference between conversation and normal text, or it makes it a rough ride for the reader.

I actually did put the thought in italics. I'm not sure if it showed up for you or not ;-;