Magus and Stuff

[Magus]

Yeah, I think you're right. That scene should have moved slower. I rushed it; shouldn't have. I actually already did intend for Magus to reflect on the scene, having in mind that he'd been overcome with images of harm to his sister and that the fear was very real given since Sif now knew who she was, he could summon her himself. I may have done a poor job getting that across. But you bring up a good point about needing to take the time to express the scene from the other's point of view in a scene this intense.

I say 'scene' a lot in this thread, apparently.

Thanks, Geist. I appreciate the advice.