Official Move Approval III

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John Connor

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Come with me if you want to Live- Tier 1 Super move- Defensive

A ally or enemy can be summoned and John is pulled out of the way of the attacker as the ally or enemy takes on damage meant for John.

It could be a ally or enemy close by.

Tier 1 Assist-- "Uncle Bob"- A old friend of John's returns to even the fight.

This man... or rather machine with feelings and a bit of bad language is literally a "unstoppable killing machine" with the ability to use any weapon, heal a bit from things, Oh... he also needs your boots, motorcycle and leather jacket.

Resistance Armor- 300 OM

John's Resistance armor, including from energy, arrows, and piercing attacks.


(Area Shield Proficiency.Required?)

((I'm not sure what to place for this one, sorry

Come With me if you want to Live - I think this one is probably a no-go at least not without more restrictions or changing the way it works. Maybe make it so it only works on allied secondaries or a willing prime? Being able to force an enemy to potentially eat a super move from their ally would be incredibly strong. I think a more agreeable adaptation would be momentarily summoning a secondary to take the hit who would then be instantly de-summoned. That way you can still defend yourself without worrying about getting permission from other players about using them as a meatshield and without worrying if one of your more permanent NPCs might die. I'd also say this probably requires area defense proficiency unless it can only defend from attacks in one direction.

Uncle Bob - I'd recommend re-reading the assists portion of the rules <!-- l --><a class="postlink-local" href="http://omniverse-rpg.com/assistsandtransformations.php#Assists">assistsandtransformations.php#Assists</a><!-- l --> He needs a statline and is only able to use moves, powers, proficiencies that you have. That being said you are able to create moves for your character that have the caveat of only being usable by an assist.

Resistance Armor - Is this always on? Does it require energy to keep/turn on? Is it body armor or is it a energy bubble around him? I'd describe this some more and add some downsides so the shield can be effective. If it protects you from all sides it requires Area Shield Proficiency.[/spoiler]

Adam Gaite

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Flash Ring -- Tier 1 Super Attack -- 600 OM (Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Time Manipulation)
Kicking his control over time into overdrive, Adam focuses intently for five seconds, producing a spiraling flow of light in shades of red around him, before he throws his hands out forward, the image of a clock appearing, only to shatter and bring the flow of time to a crunching halt. In this interval of stopped time, Adam proceeds to also kick his concealed rifle into overdrive, and flies a pair of rings around his target, letting loose a series of dozens of blasts aimed at them, all frozen in time as soon as they leave the rifle. When he has fired this attack, he returns to his position before freezing time, and time lurches back into motion, the hailstorm of laser bolts raining down on the target location in a thunderous, mildly-explosive volley.

Flash Ring -

Adam proceeds to also kick his concealed rifle into overdrive, and flies a pair of rings around his target, letting loose a series of dozens of blasts aimed at them, all frozen in time as soon as they leave the rifle

Does this mean he flies around his target twice while firing at them? How far away is he when he fires them? How much time does the target have to react before the bolts hit them?[/spoiler]

Retane

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Super Namek (Tier 2 Power Up): After some scene not happened yet , Retane taps deep inside himself finding and unleashing his inner power. His muscled are more refined and corded. He is consumed by a dark green aura. His outfit is usuall instantly transformed the color unless something challenged his head and he has darker ideas. When entering the transformation, the Powered up speed and tech is taken into account.



Attack: 2
Defence:1
Speed: 4
Tech: 3


1500 OM

Edit: These are the Additional 10 pints, so in form and with the additional stat point, Retanes Powered up Stats will be:


Attack:5
Defence:3
Speed:7
Tech:6

Total: 21 Points

Super Namek - What do you mean by the last sentence in the description? Pending an explanation of the last sentence I approve this Transformation.[/spoiler]