01-15-2017, 12:52 AM
History - please be more clear and concise with which point in time you're pulling the character from.
You are missing your character's physical description, please refer to This for further formatting.
Profs/ Powers - Master Acrobat and Super Jumping are powers, not proficiencies.
Spirit Gun - Is the 20 second charge time the same as combining all three shots into one larger, stronger, shot? or are they separate?
"Can be fired up to three times before it takes ten minutes to recharge and use again" That seems way too unforgiving, especially for a move I assume you'll want to be able to rely on a lot. To put it in perspective, a fight with another player may not even last 10 in character minutes, so you'd use this up and then be forced to fight bare handed (this goes for the 20 minute recharge time as well).
Why are you limiting yourself to 3 shots? is that what it is in the Anime? I haven't seen it so I wouldn't know.
Overall, I think you tried too hard to balance the move.
You are missing your character's physical description, please refer to This for further formatting.
Profs/ Powers - Master Acrobat and Super Jumping are powers, not proficiencies.
Spirit Gun - Is the 20 second charge time the same as combining all three shots into one larger, stronger, shot? or are they separate?
"Can be fired up to three times before it takes ten minutes to recharge and use again" That seems way too unforgiving, especially for a move I assume you'll want to be able to rely on a lot. To put it in perspective, a fight with another player may not even last 10 in character minutes, so you'd use this up and then be forced to fight bare handed (this goes for the 20 minute recharge time as well).
Why are you limiting yourself to 3 shots? is that what it is in the Anime? I haven't seen it so I wouldn't know.
Overall, I think you tried too hard to balance the move.