07-01-2015, 01:29 PM
Awesome. But I think some of the sentences should have been split apart. Closer to how we normal divided it up in character:
Omni Wrote:"My name is Omni. This is not the world you know. This is the Omniverse."
Omni Wrote:"You interest me, so I have made you part of it. The Omniverse is a place that reflects the wishes of those who are part of it."
Omni Wrote:"But! There are rules. I will explain them only once, so listen carefully.”
Omni Wrote:"This is Omnilium. It’s what ties the Omniverse together. Without it, you are nothing. With it, anything you desire can be yours. But you will need more than this. If you desire it enough, you will find it. You will find that using it comes naturally. Just think of what you desire most."
Omni Wrote:"You will not be alone in the Omniverse. There are others. Of course, they, too desire Omnilium."
Omni Wrote:"Do not fear death. For as long as you interest me, you will be reborn."
Omni Wrote:"That’s all you need to know right now. You’ll figure out the rest soon enough. I’ll be watching … and waiting."
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