Cutting Room Floor

[Proto Man]

Any thoughts on how could all this be different if Carn was more active or posted a lot? Things I have to improve on? I need some sort of motivation to wiggle out of this busy schedule.

I really liked your style, it's unique and amusing. As you kind of mentioned, your main thing was failing to be active. When you posted, it was great, but it was too infrequent and you didn't have a weapon. I dunno know if finding a partner would have brought you more activity or not, but if it had, you could have lasted a little longer (or you could have been pulled into a suicidal fight and died earlier).

Reel in your style a little. Sometimes I think you get a little too lost in it, and it can detract from your narrative.