06-13-2015, 05:41 PM
King Axorn Wrote:Holy Fire (300) (Requires Ranged Proficiency): Axorn breathes out a 3 inch diameter flamethrower-like blast of hot fire which can, if the victim is willing, purify them, clearing all dark thoughts from the person and leave them with a clear conscience. But, dark thoughts can still return to the person's mind although they take longer to manifest themselves. Axorn can, at the end of a battle that he has won, use this if the person is willing to give them a second chance. This coincidentally, always has an effect on Axorn, keeping his mind clear of dark thoughts and preventing corruption of any kind."Preventing corruption of any kind" sounds like godmoding. Putting something like "protecting him from corruption" would be fine for RP flavour.
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