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Official Move Approval III
Kakashi Hatake Wrote:Shadow Clone Technique (Requires Remote Control Proficiency) (300 OM)
By concentrating one's chakra, this technique allows the user to create corporeal duplicates of themself. The clones are nearly indistinguishable from the original, only those with heightened senses* being able to see through the rouse. These copies carry out the user's wishes and are dispelled either at the caster's whim or after taking enough damage (many small blows or one very strong one; any 'Move' would suffice), disappearing in a puff of smoke. This technique is not so much used to overpower an enemy as it is to confuse an enemy and allow an opening to strike. As this attack divides the user's chakra equally among all clones and the user, no more than a handful can be summoned at a time** without draining the user's reserves significantly. Clones may use the user's moves, though this drains the user as if the original were using it. ***

* I'm always unsure if this would need a high TEC, Insight, Enhanced Senses or some combination; what would be the best wording here?
** I don't foresee ever needing to summon more than one at a time, but would adding the ability to cast more than one ratchet up the cost? Or would the 'incrementally more draining' thing cover the advantage?
*** This last bit can be removed if it's too over-powered.

I'm going to link you this because there is a question on clones that is explained at the bottom.

Quote:Relic Glaive (300 OM) (requires Area Attack Proficiency and Physical Proficiency)

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A massive powered relic glaive, almost ten feet in height, designed to be swung in large arcs or stabbed forward. While such a weapon can be twirled around like a simple stick by those of great strength, those of normal humans may find it difficult to wield.
Tartaros typically swings the glaive in massive, swift arcs, using the polearm's range to its full potential. However, after enough strikes such a method of attack will inevitably become tiring.

Approved

Proto-Approved

Quote:Grenade (Requires Ranged and AoE Proficiency)
The standard issue infantry explosive for the USSMC for clearing groups of enemies and painting rooms. The user hold this fist sized container in one hand, turns the primer on the top, and in three second it lets rip a massive explosion that spreads out ten feet from the center and wounds anyone inside. Throwing it is optional, but highly recommended. While the range is only as far as the thrower's strength (which, for DG, is still a fair good distance) and does not pack the raw damage of the rocket launcher, the timed explosive can arced to land behind cover or otherwise dropped, rolled, bounced, or even kicked into whatever nook the enemy is hiding in. However, until the grenade explodes, it could easily be shot or kicked away.

Smokes (Requires Ranged, AoE, and Debuff Proficiency)
Almost identical to the grenade in use and shape, when thrown and the timer runs out instead of an explosion a thick cloud of smoke spews out of the top. This smoke can cover up to a 15 cubic yard area with no wind for up to a minute, and is so thick that it's near impossible to see through. Shooting through it requires pure guess to hit anyone hiding on the other side and melee inside the cloud is only slightly better. It does no damages other than mild discomfort to anyone inside, but as a tactical tool it is invaluable. Comes in many different colors!

Both approved at 300-Also loved reading these descriptions.

Quote:Hurihuri Utu (300 OM, Requires Physical Proficiency)

Once per round, after successfully blocking an attack with his shield, Kopaka can immediately choose to retaliate by bashing his opponent with his whirling shield. The combined blunt force of this attack, combined with the spinning momentum of the shield, will knock an opponent off balance, usually long enough for Kopaka to exploit the opening with a quick strike from his sword. If the bashing attack misses, however, it leaves Kopaka himself open to attack for a moment, an opportunity which swift opponents can take advantage of.

Since Kopaka is nearly the living embodiment of snow and ice, whenever this attack connects, tiny ice crystals tend to burst outwards from the point of impact, creating a glimmering shower of frozen particles in the wake of the shield's strike.

This is already encompassed under Physical Proficiency so any basic moves with your shield and sword wouldn't need specific moves. If you want the shield to leave ice on an opponent(if it doesn't already do so) that will require a move.

Quote:I'm not totally sure I did this right, but here's my first try at an Assist:

Earthshine (Tier 1 Assist): Mickey Mouse received the Earthshine gem, a small, orange-colored crystal, from Thrall upon his visit to Minas Tirith. Using the gem, Mickey Mouse has gained the ability to summon a secondary version of Simba, a lion king from one of the worlds he rules over in the Disney Realms, the Pride Lands. Simba serves as the muscle Mickey lacks, and can also be used as a mount to get from one place to the next, provided Mickey doesn't mind people looking at him strangely since he's riding a lion.

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Simba (Tier 1 Assist)
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 1
TEC: 0

Moves (I know I have to buy these separately)

Roar: Simba lets out a loud, vicious roar, which scares enemies of equal or lower level than Mickey and lowers their awareness of the battle for a moment, allowing Mickey or Simba to jump in with another attack. As an RP flavor bonus, for non-PC enemies that are particularly low-level, this may intimidate the enemy enough that they run for the hills. (300 OM, requires Debuff Proficiency)

Pounce: Simba viciously lashes out against Mickey's opponent with his front claws, dealing melee damage to them. This attack requires Simba to be in relatively close quarters to the opponent, and makes him vulnerable to enemy counter-attacks. Also, Simba's large frame causes him to be rather uncoordinated with these attacks, so if the opponent's DEF or TEC is high, they may be able to dodge this attack very easily. (300 OM, requires Physical Strength)

Pinned Ya Again: A basic lunge move, Simba lets out a roar and leaps at the enemy, tackling them to the ground. He pins them to the ground, giving Mickey a window to either escape the fight or launch his own attack. This attack does no damage. (300 OM, requires Debuff Proficiency)

Assist Approved
Roar-I'm not sure if the level criteria is appropriate. Can you switch it over to something else?
For the other two moves you won't need them. You will need a move for claws however and/or teeth if you want them.


Quote:Dragonsbane: (600) (Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)
Dragonsbane is a powerful gunblade created by Axorn with a moderate weight. It can either be used for melee attacks or can have a sharp crystal fired from the tip which, after activated from a long period of concentration (About 1 minute), will create an explosion of fire, thus burning anything within it's 3cm radius before the crystal disintegrates. The sword can only hold 12 crystals at a time, and has a large recoil, forcing the user to plant their feet before firing if they don't want to fall over.

You understand that with a shorter charge time the move will be weaker? You can change it to 7 seconds but change the wording of "burning anything".

Quote:Holy Fire (300) (Requires Ranged Proficiency): Axorn breathes out a 3 inch diameter flamethrower-like blast of hot fire which can, if the victim is willing, clear all dark thoughts from the person and leave them with a clear conscience. But, dark thoughts can still return to the person's mind although they take longer to manifest themselves. Axorn can, at the end of a battle that he has won, use this if the person is willing to give them a second chance. This coincidentally, always has an effect on Axorn, keeping his mind clear of dark thoughts and preventing corruption of any kind.

I'm going to say you're going to need Telepathy for this move and does this move do damage?
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