06-11-2015, 01:44 PM
No problem! =D
Looks good! The only thing I'd change is maybe the part about burning the enemy, as that kind of thing is typically for RP fodder. Maybe just a 'chance of harsh burns' or something to that effect rather than a definite 1st degree burn. Some players might write that as destroying their clothing or denting their armor rather than outright burning them. Other than that, I'd say it looks good. I'm not staff, so I can't actually approve its use, but it looks fair. The OM would only be 300, though. You wouldn't need that much OM to buy it unless you wanna power it up and make it a Super Move, which would make it 800 OM. You would need Ranged Prof. (shooting), Area Attack (splash damage) and Debilitate Prof. (burns), though.
Looks good! The only thing I'd change is maybe the part about burning the enemy, as that kind of thing is typically for RP fodder. Maybe just a 'chance of harsh burns' or something to that effect rather than a definite 1st degree burn. Some players might write that as destroying their clothing or denting their armor rather than outright burning them. Other than that, I'd say it looks good. I'm not staff, so I can't actually approve its use, but it looks fair. The OM would only be 300, though. You wouldn't need that much OM to buy it unless you wanna power it up and make it a Super Move, which would make it 800 OM. You would need Ranged Prof. (shooting), Area Attack (splash damage) and Debilitate Prof. (burns), though.
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Vincent Valentine
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Grand Champion
Nanaki/Red XIII
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(07-16-2018, 06:14 PM)Lord Zedd Wrote: I'm here to kick ass and write compelling stories with Vincent Valentine.
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