05-19-2015, 09:07 PM
Galel Baraz Wrote:I have only two things to point out.
1. It isn't made abundantly clear whether or not she is STILL as ruthless and cruel as she was pre-omniverse. I'm leaning towards a yes, but if I were to write Trixie, I'd want that to be clarified.
2. The Nightsisters of Dathomir don't show up until 4,700 years after Trixie is sucked into the Omniverse. (This is a minor lore gripe, I'm a lore nut. It doesn't REALLY matter, I'm just finicky about that kind of stuff).
Aside from that, your roster is a solid read and serves as an excellent crash course in 'Trixie'.
Point 1: I can fix that. Good point. I re-read her personality section and I agree.
Point 2: Yeah...about that. I'm a lore nut too and I totally stretched it. You caught me. I'm operating under the assumption that Dathomir was still there (of course) and that the old Sith Empire discovered it as well.



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