05-19-2015, 08:57 PM
I have only two things to point out.
1. It isn't made abundantly clear whether or not she is STILL as ruthless and cruel as she was pre-omniverse. I'm leaning towards a yes, but if I were to write Trixie, I'd want that to be clarified.
2. The Nightsisters of Dathomir don't show up until 4,700 years after Trixie is sucked into the Omniverse. (This is a minor lore gripe, I'm a lore nut. It doesn't REALLY matter, I'm just finicky about that kind of stuff).
Aside from that, your roster is a solid read and serves as an excellent crash course in 'Trixie'.
1. It isn't made abundantly clear whether or not she is STILL as ruthless and cruel as she was pre-omniverse. I'm leaning towards a yes, but if I were to write Trixie, I'd want that to be clarified.
2. The Nightsisters of Dathomir don't show up until 4,700 years after Trixie is sucked into the Omniverse. (This is a minor lore gripe, I'm a lore nut. It doesn't REALLY matter, I'm just finicky about that kind of stuff).
Aside from that, your roster is a solid read and serves as an excellent crash course in 'Trixie'.