Let's Read: Book Club #15

[Trixie]

@Deadpool

I finished Gloomy Town. I must say you write him really well. From what I know about Deadpool you seem to portray him perfectly. I absolutely love how your companion is the Gingerbread man from Shrek. (or at least that's how I see him). This isn't a criticism or a negative thing, but in this post there are some broken color brackets that result in the code being displayed and the color not going through. It was an interesting read. I liked how it felt like I reading a comic book that Deadpool was in. Your clever use of 4th wall breaking and humor had me laughing through all of it. Deadpool drawing on Gingy's face with a marker was hilarious. Your descriptive ability is good as well. I was able to follow your character as if I had a third person view. Everything from the entrance into the Pale Moors and their arrival at the Inn with the busty Innkeeper. I could visualize every action and every layout with minimal effort. It just flowed. Good stuff man. Keep it up.