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Official Move Approval III
#44
Proto Man Wrote:_
Chained Nightmare (Physical Strength, Burst Movement, Shapeshift, Buff Profficiency)- Carn rolls into a ball and elongates into a 6 feet capsule. The capsule grows sharp, razor-like spines at one end and forms a roughly rectangular block at the other. After 6 seconds, more defining features take shape to form the 5-foot blade of the Anomaly chainsaw, side vernier thrusters and its handle. Once the shapeshift is complete, Carn becomes an objectform Anomaly, removing verbal speech capabilities. In this form, Carn can charge at targets like a ground torpedo while leaving a trail of damage from the high-velocity, sharp razor-lined chainsaw that operates like tank tracks, dragging the rest of the body. Every attack takes 5 seconds, 2 seconds for targeting, turning with vernier thruster sideways and 3 for the high-speed charge attack. Carn can also choose someone to wield the objectform, causing the wielder to enter a berzerked state which lightens footwork, hastens attack speed thanks to the vernier thrusts assisting each swing and bursts in maniacal laughter. Once wielded, Carn will suffer the same amount of damage the wielder recieves for that round and is unable to fight individually as humanform.

Underlined the modification. Made it vague enough to taste. For the sake of being very descriptive, Carn turns into a 6-foot chainsaw with a 5-foot blade and vernier thruster that helps with turning, lateral motion is possible because of the high-velocity chains themselves that acts like tank tracks. Wielding Carn makes it easier to attack as a chainsaw since the vernier then assists each swing of the wielder. Isn't that vague enough for such a caveat? What else do I need to change?


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