05-15-2015, 06:06 PM
Y'know, Mickey, it's really hard to critique somebody when you can barely find anything wrong with their work... Jeez, givin' me a hard time!
Anyways, as I said, this is actually a really great post, and I was legit looking for things I could find that maybe I would have done differently after I had initially read it, and honestly, all I saw was a few punctuation and capitalization errors here and there, mainly a few verbs now and again...
But, I was so distracted by how well written this was, I couldn't notice the mistakes in the slightest, as I really liked how you organized dialogue, (something I still struggle with sometimes,) and generally how well you worked Mickey Mouse, a relatively comical character, into somebody so likable, similarly to how Kingdom Hearts portrayed him, in which you mimicked almost perfectly.
Compared to other characters on here, Mickey himself is quite the contrast to more gritty characters like mine, but I'm really glad we have such great writers on-board to handle them correctly! I obviously made a mistake by not reading up your earlier posts, in which case, I really need to!
Again, it might just be me and my uppity attitude, but I seriously enjoyed that thoroughly, Mick!
My latest post, tear it down folks!
Anyways, as I said, this is actually a really great post, and I was legit looking for things I could find that maybe I would have done differently after I had initially read it, and honestly, all I saw was a few punctuation and capitalization errors here and there, mainly a few verbs now and again...
But, I was so distracted by how well written this was, I couldn't notice the mistakes in the slightest, as I really liked how you organized dialogue, (something I still struggle with sometimes,) and generally how well you worked Mickey Mouse, a relatively comical character, into somebody so likable, similarly to how Kingdom Hearts portrayed him, in which you mimicked almost perfectly.
Compared to other characters on here, Mickey himself is quite the contrast to more gritty characters like mine, but I'm really glad we have such great writers on-board to handle them correctly! I obviously made a mistake by not reading up your earlier posts, in which case, I really need to!
Again, it might just be me and my uppity attitude, but I seriously enjoyed that thoroughly, Mick!
My latest post, tear it down folks!
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