C&C Trading

[Mickey Mouse]

So, the person above you posts a link. You briefly critique their post, offering a few constructive words of advice, and then post your own link, and someone else critiques you, posts their link, and so on, and so forth.

For me: viewtopic.php?f=51&t=2397#p21150 It's a tad long, so I'm only asking for criticism on the part after the asterisks (about halfway down). If you'd like to do the whole post, be my guest, but the top half isn't necessary if you don't want to. Thanks!